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RE: Splintered Lands EP1 (Inspired by SteemMonsters)

in #steempress7 years ago (edited)

Splintered Lands EP1

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I like the way you put the reader into the tavern scenario and then you move onto the process of seeking and giving new information through the eyes of the characters.

Interesting how "Cros The Goblin" is described:
“I hear that he’s made literal war machines. The guy has no magic talent, so he builds a bunch of steam-shooting golems and they wipe out everything they catch off guard. Amazing.”

In other words, the viewpoint of the characters and not the narrator, is our guide into the (Splintered Lands) world situation.