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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 1: Request for First Part of the Story

Mr. Lim has already given the full payment of the house. He expects and hopes for a new life with his two boys. His children, Michael and Brent, five and three years old respectively, run inside to explore the new house.
Then, the horrible experience in the past flashed back. He slapped his face hard to divert his thought to the present day.

"We are safer now." he sighed deeply. "I loss my wife already, I cannot let my children be in danger or be harmed again." he continued.

He went inside the house and called his two boys. To his surprise, Michael and Brent are drenched in their own blood.

"Michael, Brent!" he cried out loud.

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