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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago

Thank you @adsactly for hosting this! This is my summary following @cwen’s storyline:

Adanma and Mama leave for the mountain early morning the next day. Queen, although tempted to come with Adanma to look out for her, stays home.

On their way to the mountain, Adanma and Mama catch up on how they’ve been the past years. Mama will see how very similar Adanma is behaving, much like her sister Olachi.

They start their ascent. Adanma’s phone rings with messages from Queen, filled with vague phrases and words. Queen’s messages seem chaotic because of the lack of signal in the mountain. She dismisses the messages and continues going up the mountain.

The farther they went up, Mama noticed how differently Adanma started behaving — muttering under her breath, moving quicker, laughing out of nowhere. It scared Mama and she herself was already having difficulty keeping up with Adanma.

As she reached the summit, Adanma found herself alone in the dark. Her Mama nowhere to be found. She heard rustles in the leaves, felt some breeze creep on her back. Adanma got out her phone and saw missed calls and messages from Queen. Then, from an anonymous number, she read the last message: “I’m coming for you.”

Then the phone ran out of battery.

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Thank you for your valid summary.