Hahahah @katharsisdrill
This is really beautiful and artistic. Perfect!
I tell you what, man, while writing this scene my imagination wasnt far from this at all! Even, that was the exact kind of hair I imagined the Professor with - exact! And I visualised him with glasses just like that too! And I imagined Sen. Henry to be a baldie just like that too! What coincidences, how much you relate to my narrative is really stunning to me, it gladdens my heart. #grin
I usually write humour and I love humour a lot, but this story was a kind of serious story meant to be laden with suspence and stuff, so while imagining the part I wrote, I tried to infuse suspence and seripusness. After it all I thought of a good part that could tolerate a little humour and the toilet scene had it!
Hahah. I love the toilet scene too, and being a humourist, it was my favourite too. Good of you to illustrate it.
I think that both suspense, horror and drama is improved with some humour. Hitchcock had a lot of humour in his films!