I liked the built up of the story. Though I think you could have used more science. Like how the magical liquid was fixing the mutations. I just think it ended too adruptly. Like the plot was just about to come, but what came was the climax. The way you built it up, got me interested and I wanted to know more. You know! Anyway, that's just my feedback.
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Your feedback matters alot to me I Am going to add some points to make it more interesting. I hope you will like the upcoming posts I am going to take care next time.