That's a great intro! Your English is very good.
I think you have the right idea for Steemit.
Keeping this in mind he continued engaging with people in comment section, thus increasing his followers and building a good relationship with some of the community members.
That is a great strategy.
Your writing in English, as I mentioned, is very good. I don't know if you use a translator or if you've written it in English, but well done.
There are only a few tiny pieces that I can advise on.
Your grasp of phrases and sayings is good, but not quite perfect - 'twist his hand' should be 'twisted his arm' - for example.
Having said that, if that is the only type of thing I can pick up on, then this is excellent.
Pleased to meet you, Anwaar.
No I didn't use any translator,but googled some phrases for good impact,thank-you for the corrections.