Dear @rebeccabe i actually love the plot.You description on Darius' condition was fantastic.I don't know if you have planed it this way but it feels like a dark story-which i love- i m starting getting attached to the characters.Especially Victoria.Seems determined>Thumbs up for your try
PS i just saw this tag and i ll just have to check it.Is it ok if i try or should i ask @michelle.gent?You kinda know my writing so i d love to hear your opinion
you need to check and see if @michelle.gent is accepting new people I would definitely recommend you @mindtrap