He didn’t realize he was teaching her the game, the one he had known his whole life. She was smart, learning quickly by watching his every move, listening to his words. He lied, she had heard him on more than one occasion.
They were going out that night. Who knew what time they would be home? We are depending on you to take care of the younger ones. Another lie. He couldn’t wait to get out of the house, forget about his responsibilities. Brats!
All of them. Hitchhikers just along for the ride.
Charming personalities are frequently known to be master manipulators. Drama and confusion often proceed or follow the unfolding event in progress. He was oblivious to how evil he could be, but he had help. Someone was feeding his ego. Whispering in his ear, telling him exactly how he could get away from them. Death was too good for them, but torture would work.
The inkling of sanity that he held on to was evaporating quickly. He was most concerned about the blowback from those that discovered he was fraud. How stupid were they to place their faith in him anyway? They knew he had always been a scoundrel, he only played along to get what he wanted. Now he was nearly finished with them. Freedom was everything, but that oldest one knew his secrets, she would be his demise. She would become him.
I found myself disappointed when it ended! I was into it and want to read more-sigh...
That poses a problem for me as I hadn’t figured out the rest of the story. Lol. 🐓🐓
Oooh intrigued! 💜💜💜💜⭐️
My friend returns. Yeah! Glad you liked it. Maybe I should write a second chapter.
Weren’t you doing a festival this weekend with Googley? Your friend ❤️🐓
You should!
I decided not to do the festival with Googley, my sweetheart didnt win and I think it’s because she sabotaged it lol
Hugs to you!💜
Hey there.
I hope you do not mind me dropping this reply here, it is older now, so action has slowed down...
@aunt-deb msgd me this by email and wanted me to advise you:
// Barry
PS this person in your story sounds like a politician lol
Thanks for the message and yes, quite possible he is a politician. Hope you are well. 🐓🐓
Oooh! I like that!
You're quite an observationist and I mean that in the best way possible.
Nicely done and thanks for gracing the story-mentor tag with your writing :)
Thank you for your support, It means a lot to me. I had some extra time this weekend and did a book review as well. I know you are busy, so when you get a chance to look at it.....
Hope things are calming down at your place with injuries and new schedules to maintain. Be well. 🐓🐓
I'd like to read more. This story has intrigued me. Nicely done, @mother2chicks!
Thank you my friend. Nice to hear coming from a fellow writer that spins a damned good story herself. 🐓🐓
Thank you, my friend!
This is some deep psychological stuff right here....... a parent/guardian twisting a young mind?...And the mysterious whisperer? You have to expand this! I feel like a hooked fish, don't throw me back!