I enjoyed the story but for some reason I was in Australia at the end of the 19th Century. It was very easy to imagine the cave and the horse so you wrote a great story.
I enjoyed the story but for some reason I was in Australia at the end of the 19th Century. It was very easy to imagine the cave and the horse so you wrote a great story.
That's ok if you were in Australia. The names of the towns could have been different. It's the setting that I was going for, so if you found it there, I'm happy. Yeah, I would have gotten the story done sooner, but I wrote it too well and the horse stepped on my foot. :D
Thank you for the feedback.