Excellent piece. I'm curious to see what happens next, since I've never encountered someone talking about AI in terms of gestation and birth. I also like that a lot of historical details were left purposefully unaccounted for. :)
One suggestion, though: the use of formatting for text. Between the alternating bold and italics, it was a little distracting. Something to consider for next time. :)
Well, the formatting started to try and get more attention and it's worked. I tend to agree with you, but it's getting votes and payouts.
On the subject of AI, it's an interesting thought that I have about a blend of "clone like" vessels, with programmable AI minds.
Part two is out! read it here: http://bit.ly/2bWLNQT Upvote and comment for a chance to share in the payout!