It was a good weekend read of course, As it was about to finish this is going to be a Ghost story as Micheal had been doing that things to frighten the lady.
You could also attach one two snaps to look it slightly more attractive, Just saying...Nevertheless its a good creativity and as a steemit member one of the purpose here is to encourage such rare talents.
I will also check the other stories in the link you provided as and when free.
Have a nice weekend for you..