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RE: What About Little John? Part Three

in #story6 years ago

"I gave to John in order to receive a platform of sorts so that I could interject advice Many times people do not want to listen until they realize you are somebody Coming up, some of those conversations.
Sorry".

Very true, that you express.

"The smell was unavoidable and constant, That stated, I am not putting enough emphasis on it, Even mentioning that aspect of my experience feels like an insult to my friend, Then again, it is reality".

Excuse me if I offended you and your friend. I saw it in your previous writing and I tried to visualize together that person you describe, what she represents for others: their appearance, their smell, their language. I tried to recreate the store scene: what you felt, the cashier and little John. Triangulate those feelings and that vision of the other. Maybe I did not explain myself well. I reiterate my apologies to you and your friend.