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RE: BROKEN DREAMS (An Original Poem)

in #story8 years ago (edited)

I can totally relate to looking back on my mistakes and seeing how they led me to successes.

It took me a second to get the part about not laying down too long to look up at the stars. I love doing that. Do you mean you should get back up soon and shoot for the stars rather than lay there?

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Hi, @bbrewer - Thanks for your comment. What I was thinking about when I wrote he line about laying down and gazing at the stars was resting on my laurels and becoming too complacent. I like staring at the night sky too!