Good advice. It made me think of needle in a haystack, you know the peace within; so I write, "Within the haystack is a silver needle. It stitches life together with a peaceful blue thread."
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Good advice. It made me think of needle in a haystack, you know the peace within; so I write, "Within the haystack is a silver needle. It stitches life together with a peaceful blue thread."
Nice lines, @beginningtoend! Thank you!
Thanks, I just started posting in poetry last week, check out my blog if you have the time. @beginningtoend