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RE: The Stormborn

in #story7 years ago

Nor do I know why or even how is stormblood gathering in human real

Is this a typo? I don't understand the phrase.

Small cottage, hidden from the world by thick forest, stood alone in the midst of rampaging storm. Interior of the cottage was simple.

A small cottage. The interior.

So many missed articles.

Hey, @spalatino, I love the idea, but I think that you should work on proofreading. Do you use Grammarly? Try it out! You'll get a more readable text. :)

I will be using your idea as part of the inspiration for a story I'm writing.

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Thank you for the advices. First was human realm, it was a typo.