Awesome short my darling friend! My tendency is to say "Can't wait for the next chapter" haha, though I know with short stories it's entirely possible for this crazy yet cool cliffhanger to be the ending, letting the reader (namely me) imagine what happened next!
You really managed to bring all three characters to life in such a short time, I had vivid images of each of them! Loved it, and if you are going to continue it that's awesome too!
Thanks, awesome @dreemit! Again, you're spot on to tee. This was only meant to be a cliffhanger of a tense scenario, told from differing perspectives. But I love flashpoint fiction as does the incredible @jedau. I'm working on another book so can't wait to start posting that.
Thanks, lovely @dreemit, for that amazing feedback. :)