You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Hellbent - Part 1 (My Original Short Story)View the full contextView the direct parentezzy (77)in #story • 7 years ago Hey buddy, thank you so much for the feedback! Much appreciated! (p.s. Error corrected. Thanks for spotting in.)
It really is a good start, from some of the comments, I may be wrong on the relationship direction, but will wait and see and read how it all pans out.