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RE: Hellbent - Part 1 (My Original Short Story)

in #story7 years ago

Hey there, @jedau! Sorry for pushing the boundaries out on the old "crimson vino" descriptions but it goes in accordance to the world I'm portraying, lol. And man, thanks so very much for your invaluable feedback. Should have a little story here that may turn into something a little bigger down the road.

Joe is a hardened individual who kinda likes to do things his way. So yeah, a little bit more about him coming up soon, lol. Getting the next part ready, many thanks for dropping by! I needed to hear what my "brother from another mother" thinks! Awesome, my bro! :)

(p.s. Sorry, my mistake, I wasn't clear about it at all. The Setup was a short piece of elongated flash fiction supposed to be a complete work. The spin-offs after that were just adding to the original. So I think I'm done with that story for now, man. But I got in some good practice writing from differing perspectives though).