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RE: The Setup - An Alternative Take (My Original Short Fiction)

in #story7 years ago

Lol, I love the Martha meme!!! It's so apt given the tension in the story. But yeah, flashpoint city right now. I also love conjoining plots and seeing the same scenario from different perspectives.

You got Mr. Robinson to a tee. A tired old man in need of some action in his life and wanting something more from it than just routine endeavours. Loving it, bro.

As always, your input is second to none. Beautiful stuff, bro. Thanks as always for stopping by and delivering your killer feedback!! :)