RE: Paranormal Activity part 2. Grandma Precious

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grammarnazi (5)in #story • 7 years ago

You have a minor typo in the following sentence:

Mellow realised what happend she had a huge fight with him and didn't speak to anyone for two weeks.

It should be happened instead of happend.

7 years ago in #story by grammarnazi (5)

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calmavida (57) 7 years ago

thank youuuuuuu!!!

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