It was just a thought. Not meant to be pointing it out.
It's a brilliant story and wonderfully crafted. I loved it.
I even loved the part where the whole gashed leg thing became a non issue as he found an arrowhead and didn't care about his friend...
You gots a lot of talent. Come say hi in our discord: https://discord.gg/4Nu4AJ
You're so kind! When I go back and re-read I see a lot of errors haha
But it was a lot of fun to write which is the point I know.
I saw your panoramic photo today and thought it was so beautiful. That format, the open sky just goes on forever.