Nice rhymes yo!! This was very well written. "How ironic when you're bionic, with newest tech, coding and such" was my favorite line, nice internal scheme there... I up voted and followed! We have a lot in common I enjoy writing lyrical poetry as well check out my page and maybe follow back :D
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Thank you very much. I specialize in rhyme and rhythm so I'm really happy you were able to pick up on the internal rhymes. I feel slant rhymes are necessary when options are few but the ironic bionic fell into a nice duet off a whim. I definitely appreciate your support and feedback. I will definitely check out your page for further inspiration. I'm all for lyrical poetry, hope you enjoy my other posts as well.