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RE: Echoes of Tommorrow's Past - Part 12 (My Original Novella)

in #story7 years ago

I like how you're incorporating familiar concepts into the story, brother. It's good that James is conscious once again, but he really needs to take a breather and think things through. Dolores made it seem like it was all someone else's ideas, when in fact she had a hand in it all along. I understand James' fear of letting Dr Grey dabble with his mind, since he wouldn't be in this mess if it weren't because of them, but he really needs to think things through. Herbert didn't have the same opportunity afforded to him, and while it's all experimental, it's way better than going down the same path.

12 chapters in and you have my full attention, brother. No amount of internet issues could take my eyes away from your engrossing masterpiece. You take the reader to a different universe with every story. Magnificent, brother. Simply magnificent!

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Hey, my bro!

Yes, indeed! I love your feedback! Is Dr. Grey trying to help them out or up to something more sinister? I hope the conclusion is something that is well received. Dolores and the Doctor seem to have his best interests in mind, but the way there are going about it is confusing the living hell outta James. Dolores with her persistence and the Doctor's worrying solution. How much can a guy take? Lol.

Thank you for accompanying me on this journey. It's turning out to be a touch longer than I thought, but it gives me the creative freedom I need to tell the story in it's entirety.

Thank you for the massive compliments and your undying support. You have some new posts I need to catch up on and will be doing so right now! Bless, my brother! :)

Right?? I mean, I guess concealing some information doesn't help in winning over trust, but yeah, if only people would be transparent then their intentions wouldn't be questioned. But then again, that wouldn't make a compelling story haha!

Brother, you need not question whether I accompany you in countless journeys. When I said you have a fan for life in me, I meant it. You're stuck with me as a constant commenter and supporter. Deal with it :D

You're an absolute blessing and believe me when I say I appreciate every word from you. I love your line.

But then again, that wouldn't make a compelling story haha!

So true. It wouldn't have the same impact any other way! :)