The wait for this chapter is just so worth it. It was such a tense situation James was put in. To think it was framed by something so menial. Only you have the skill to pull that off, brother! Offset against the cheerful cashier, that claustrophobic feeling was all the more highlighted.
There is not a doubt in my mind that you're going to finish strong with this one. Each chapter surpassing the one that came before it. In my opinion, all of them are surefire hits! Way to solidify your standing as one of the best authors here on Steemit. Your legacy will live on forever in the blockchain, my brother!
Hey there, my brother! Thanks a lot, man!
I was going for a "super" freak-out series of moments so I guess I achieved that, lol! The quiet before the storm. It's all shot from his perspective and hopefully the message hit home as to the madness he's going through!
I've got this one wrapped up already so just need to complete the last few chapters now. Your compliments are so humbling, my bro and I appreciate every single bit of feedback from you.
Really, brother... Thank you.