Tense from start to finish. It's quite hard keep the focus on conversation-heavy pieces, but since you're the master I really had no doubt. The length of the story really kept the rhythm going quite nicely. This was such a treat to read, very snappy. Magnificent work, brother!
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Awesome @jedau! I've missed you, man! Yeah, this one was pretty conversation heavy but it's an idea I'm working on for a new project and one I feel could provide for quite an interesting premise.
Man, you've been busy. I've been trying to find the time to catch up on your "traffic koan" collection as I don't want to miss out on even one. so I'll have to do a "marathon run" through and provide my summation. But it kind of goes without saying, coming from you it WILL be brilliant. You are doing so well now but I want you to get more payouts than even now. I will always contribute 100% to supporting you because the simple fact of the matter is I KNOW you deserve every cent.
Thank you stopping by, my most excellent brother! :)