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RE: Echoes of Tommorrow's Past - Part 4 (My Original Novella)

in #story • 8 years ago

I'm glad to be of service any way I can, brother! I await patiently to read about your thoughts :D Yeah, it's always great to be unpredictable, and it's quite hard to do especially once you have established an identity. You have to think of ways that your fans don't expect, but still make everything coherent.

James's mother committed suicide that same day after seeing him off to school when he was fourteen. This was his last memory of her but that image seems to have haunted him throughout his life. He never quite got over the fact that he never got to say goodbye...

Oh shoot... I didn't know that. Wait a minute! Why was I supposed to say sorry for his loss! HAHAHA! He's a fictional character for God's sake. That's your power, man. That's your power haha Was it mentioned before? I don't recall reading that. Did I miss it or did it slip my mind? Perhaps I need to make a trip to Digital Realities to recover that memory.

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     8 years ago  

    I just double checked, but yep, was mentioned back in Part 2.

    ”I guess so.” He acknowledged. ”I’m just… scared, is all. You know… My mother committed suicide when I was fourteen. The last recollection I have is of her waving goodbye to me by the front door. Later that same day, the school informed me that she was gone. It was devastating, Dr. Gray. I’ve been an orphan for most of my life now.” He sat forward and leaned his arms upon the Doctor’s desk. ”I just don’t want to relive that horrifying ordeal all over again.”

    But it's kool, bro. I'm so busy lately I could have easily missed it out, lol. Again, your feedback is invaluable. So looking forward to my journey through this story.

    Bless you, man! :)

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       8 years ago  

      Ah shoot, sorry about that, brother. I read every word, so it must've just slipped my mind. I'm terribly busy as well, as you can imagine. Juggling lots of thoughts in my head. Man, I'm so bummed I missed out on that important detail...

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         8 years ago  

        Please don't apologise, bro! As you said, you're in a crazy busy space right now. I'm just glad you stopped by when you got the time. :)

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