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RE: Hellbent - Part 1 (My Original Short Story)

in #story7 years ago (edited)

rip off that asshole's face and stretch it clean across the ball of my fist, eyeholes held in place by two fingers. I ain’t the same man I was yesterday

And I am not the same woman I was before reading that line. What an opener! And you're hardcore anti-hero burst onto the scene with amazing realism. Love it! Please say you'll let us interview you on Tuesday :)

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Hey there, @jrhughes! Lol, sorry that beginning got a little gritty. That's not how I normally start off but I had to remain true to my characters, lol! Thank you for the kind words coming from someone as talented as yourself. :)

(Sorry I missed your message on steemchat. I'm not 100% sure I can make this coming Tuesday but the one after that is a definite green light. Is that OK? And thanks again for considering me for an interview.)