Hi steemians!
I am going to narrate this store based on a real incident that I heard in news. Some scenes are exaggerated for the story.
Anand was a good a person, very talented, hard worker. With his hard work he was the foremost in any matter, whether in studies or games. He was one of the best students in the college. Everyone has at least a weakness, so Anand has also had a weakness of selfishness and stubborn. He had a beautiful sister Amrita and she was studying at another college
Now a days he is not able to concentrate on any work, cannot readily study, and he is disturbed by a girl, yes he fell in love. It was three months ago, his sister brought her friend home, her friend was very beautiful, and introduced her to him, he delighted to meet her and attracted to her beauty. She had long black hair, brown eyes, fit and curvy body and she wore a peacock green full skirt and yellow silk scarf that adorned her neck that shows her as a hi fashioned girl. From the day he saw her, he did not sleep well, his hormones awakened, he felt some unknown feeling, and she started to love her.
He tried many times not to propose her and express his love but could not, perhaps he would not be able to bear if she refuse him, because he was a stubborn. But how long can wait, few other boys also followed her in front of him. He thought of proposing her defiantly because one his friend 'Rahul' inquired about her.
“You like her don’t you?” he asked eagerly.
Anand was unable to hide his grin, he shook his head said " No, not really"
“She is pretty cute, don’t you think?”
“Yeah, I agree she’s very cute.”
Anand knows why he asked about her, she wasn’t important to him until his friends eagerly. He decides to propose her in the evening. He planed several things say to her.
In the evening when he looked at her, his mind thoughts came to focus on one thing "She had a pretty smile; I would be a luckiest guy in the world if I marry her".
He began to propose her, his blood becomes hot; fingers started shivering "Sweta, I want to tell you something"
"Please go ahead, no formalities" she smiled at him
"Okay, I want to be with you in my entire life" he pleaded
"I am sorry, I never thought you like in that way" she refused.
He was disappointed, he was angry with his own, he thought "I know that she will refuse, why did I plead with her?"
After that event he was disgusted, and he thought somehow he could have her in his life, but she does not want him too, she never likes him.
A few months later, his friend Rahul came to him said “I am in love with her" seemed to be happy.
"Have you proposed her," Anand asked.
"Yes, she accepted and she also gave me a heart shaped greeting card" he showed him the card.
Anand becomes jealous, he couldn't control himself, he felt that he was insulted by her, he thought "She is egotistical of her beauty, I am going to teach her a lesson", his mind went aggressive, he started to make the worst plans. The next day he met a mercenary, given him all details of her and ordered him to pour acid on her face.
"When and where can I see her to spray the acid?" the mercenary asked
"Tomorrow she will leave at 9 am from home to college, by her scooter, and almost she reaches the remote place at 9.15 am, where you could spray the acid" he confirmed her timing.
"I need the registered number of the scooter and its color"
"Yes of course, she has a unique blue metallic color scooter is here its number " he written the number in a slip.
"One more thing, can you watch her in the morning and tell me that whet color dress wearing tomorrow"
"Yes, I will call you when she leaves at home," he gave him some money as an advance payment.
The next day he watched her, she was in yellow color salwar suit, he immediately called the mercenary and told about the color of her dress. Then he went to his collage as usual, but his heart began to beat highly, his pulse becomes high, he was waiting for the mercenary's call, That time he felt that he had done some cruel intentions, he thought that he should not have done that.
At the same time Sweta met Anand's sister at the bus stop "Hey, Sweta stop!, I too come with you to our collage"
She stopped the scooter and said “It's a little late for me to come to college, because I have some work on the way, you please drop me at the bank and take my scooter to collage"
Amrita also agreed and sit on the back seat, when they reached the bank, Sweta got down from the scooter and Amrita started the scooter and went to college. Unfortunately, she also wore yellow color Salwar suite at the time.
When she entered the remote area the mercenary already waiting for the scooter, he looked at the scooter's number, after confirming the number, suddenly jumped and stop the scooter, she stooped the scooter looked at him for a while, he poured a whole bottle of hydro-chloric acid onto her innocent face and ran away.
Anand's mobile buzzed, it was his mom immediately he grabs the phone said "hello!".
"Your sister has been admitted in the hospital, someone sprayed acid on her face, she has victim of a violent acid attack" her mom cried
What the heck, he rushed to the hospital, there he sees his own sister laid on bed with burnt skin, he screamed.
"What I have done, I wanted teach her a lesson, god taught me a lesson now" he cried.
He is crying out and he cannot repay the beautiful face of his innocent sister.
Original short story authored by @jyoti-thelight and this post is in response to @bycoleman 's CONTEST.
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such a horrible one. damn even scary to imagine . is it a real story ? or you fabricated it a bit ? whatever the moral is just awesome.
Thank you for reading and the feedback
This is a beautiful story. I've always had a soft spot for Indian stories....Loved it! Keep it up @jyoti-thelight
thank you @scarletmedia for reading and the valuable feedback :)
so touching story.
thank you
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thank you
cool
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Argh hard story but i like the way you write it, it is real or mixed with fantasy?
some are based one real incident and added some scenes to spice up the story
nice story as always dear
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Nice story my friend
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Hi nice write upvoted you
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wow nice story super like it ..... ;-)
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Amrita
Thats a great story from you friend
Keep the good works up
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Tough love!
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Hmm stone heart, I wonder when a lady says no to a guy it's like an insult it's mutual thing she doesn't want that's fine and now his beautiful sister has paid for it... He should marry her lol