I enjoyed this story so far, and have a few thoughts on where it might be going. I assume there will be a Part Two! I like reading scifi and horror genre fiction.
It gave her a sense of power to edit with a pen, as if she were issuing death sentences to a sentence or two that didn’t quite meet her very high standard.
I really liked this passage; creative and poetic!
Thanks for the comment, Kenny. I need to stop by and return the favor on a few of yours.
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