This is my favorite of the 3 you've posted so far. You include such great details throughout, and you do a nice job of controlling the pace of the story with punctuation and line breaks. Awesome writing!
This is my favorite of the 3 you've posted so far. You include such great details throughout, and you do a nice job of controlling the pace of the story with punctuation and line breaks. Awesome writing!
Thank you so much!
Thank YOU for being an amazing writer! :-D <3