Thank you.
OK, the best advice I have for you is to write.
Keep writing, keep trying to improve your storytelling, but the most important thing is to write for yourself.
Don't write what other people want you to write because if you try to please everyone else, you'll never be happy with your writing and you'll end up pleasing no one.
At least if you write to please yourself, ONE person is going to be happy.
Don't give up!
Good Luck :)