Wow, @ebitularmbert, this is an amazing and sobering piece of writing! I am very impressed with your talent as a writer, and also with your ability to write about such a painful and personal subject. It's this kind of personal experience put to words that impacts people, and makes them think twice about life.
To help you with English language skills I have a suggestion for a more correct word to use:
it was actually I who pressurized Jeremiah
- it was actually I who pressured Jeremiah
I've upvoted and resteemed this article as my daily post promotion for people whom I have previously curated. Please keep writing, and don't become discouraged. It can take some time to become recognized.
I recommend that you change one of your tags to: ocd-resteem. This is a work worthy of it. Here's the link to the article explaining more: https://steemit.com/ocd-resteem/@ocd/ocd-introducing-ocd-resteem-get-resteemd-by-ocd
Most sincerely,
@mitneb
I cannot tell you how grateful i am. For your encouragement, and correction (you have actually read my writing!), and your curation. But i am.
I am quickly looking up the ocd-resteem link you provided. And will pronto take it up as one of my tags. Thanks again, much.
Thanks very much for the encouraging comment, @ebitularmbert! I'm so glad to hear that you are encouraged, and are following up with the link. Best of luck with it.
Cheers!
@mitneb