Scratches-A fictional ghost story

in #story7 years ago (edited)

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It was an evening like any other,after finishing our last class we were going to our usual hanging spot,when Naveen's phone rang,it was Vishal,he was a friend of Naveen,They used to be classmates when they were kids,I personally didn't know Vishal much,other than he was a strange boy,he was quiet and didn't say much,You can say that he was the opposite of me.Vishal called because his parents were out of town and as he was all alone with just her dog he wants us to spend the night at his house.so,we got changed and arrived at his place.His house was at the farthest corner of the city,it was build i think around somewhere in the 1900's
and was pretty big for a house build on a wooden frame.
After arriving we played cards for a while,and then prepared our dinner,after we finished eating,We sat around to tell ghost stories.
The problem was all the stories we knew were kind of lame,and we ended up getting bored.All of a sudden Vishal spoke up,lets make a Ouija board
for the people who doesn't know Its a sort of board u make to call spirits,so we went to google and find a stupid tutorial
and ended up making our own,now to be honest it looked kind of its never going to work,
So we used the board,we lit candles,put a coin in the middle,did all the mumbo jumbo and just as i predicted nothing happened and after 20 minutes or so we got bored."Its not working" Naveen Said,
"Yeah lets just go to bed" i replied
We went to bed immediately after turning off the light, Vishal,Me and Naveen were all sleeping beside each other in a big bed
I always have trouble sleeping in someone's house,In the middle of the night i was awoken by a strange sound,after a minute or so i realized it was Vishal
he was making noises in his sleep..hm....hm...hm..hm
I tried to go back to sleep,but his sounds become louder and he started to talk in his sleep,so i woke Naveen up,"May be he's having a nightmare" Naveen said
and just as he said that we heard weird scratching in the door,we thought it was her dog,as they have a nasty habbit of scratching
So i called her three times and then threw a pillow towards the door,to make her stop.Thats when she barked..from right beside me,She was next to me the whole time,so who's making the noise i thought,As the scratching grew louder we got scared,we tried waking Vishal but it was like his body has frozen up,he was shivering like hell,after a few minutes we heard sounds of,half a dozen people screaming and running in the room,we tried to switch on the lights,but the switches doesn't seem to work,Naveen started to recite some mantras
I can't even describe how scared i am,when suddenly Vishal got out of bed,he was walking strangely like a doll,and just seeing him a cold sensation ran towards my body

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Vishal has his back on us and his head was hanging down,his hair was covering half his face,he was still making the noises,slowly very slowly he began to turn around
Just then Naveen said"its not Vishal",in the dim light i could see vishals face,it was him but somehow it wasn't,his skin was pale and eyes are big and red abnormally
his mouth was twisted out of shape and has a weird smile,it was like someone was pretending to be Vishal
In a sound that doesn't seem human he said"U invited me,here i am"
i didn't remember anything that happen afterwords i think me and Naveen passed out,when we woke up it was morning and Vishal's gone,we were pretty freaked out from last night's events
so we grabbed our bags and left as fast as we could,we tried Vishal's phone but it was out of range,we even tried in the afternoon to no success,later in the evening i got this message from Vishal

Vishal: Help
Me: Dude u ok,u scaring the hell out of us
Vishal: im hiding in the closet he's coming,i can hear it
Me: Who's coming
Vishal: The one we invited last night
Vishal: I dont wanna die man
Me: Dont worry i m calling the police,they'll be there soon
Vishal: He's just outside the closet
Vishal: Have i gone mad
Me: Dont worry just wait 10 minutes help's on the way
Me: You ok
Me: Reply plzzz
Vishal: It's stopped. I can't hear anything.
Me: im so glad it stopped
Vishal: Can you come by the house i need to see you
Me: Off-course i'll be there
Vishal: Cant wait
Me: Vishal
Me: Vishal how do i know its you?
Vishal went offline.

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ha haaa.... kamaal he kar diya jehaar ......

bahut jehar yar chakkar are h mujhe :D

ha haaaa....

This gives me goosebumps

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Contest ke king to inuke bhai hee h,wo hi karenge :D

Ok, guys, since you guys are recommending the story writing contest, will be taken up by a little twist. Watch out for next week post.

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Hahahaaaaaa :D

like it, different narration keep it up

sahi kiya raat ko nahi pdha....it as scary :) good build up....still first part break into small para.... :) keep steeming!

I'll try to improve the presentation ,Thnx

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