I like your style. As I read it, I really noticed the word 'fabric' and it distracted me a little. It might be worth using a different word in a couple of the sentences.
I like your style. As I read it, I really noticed the word 'fabric' and it distracted me a little. It might be worth using a different word in a couple of the sentences.
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Thank you for your critique. I will in the future take note of this and try to improve my writing. Thanks again.
Which authors would you cite as influences?
I don't really have any particular authors that have particularly influenced the way I write. I think it's more to do with my surroundings and the types of issues and ideas I'm exposed to through the media.