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RE: Hypnotized (An Original Poem)

in #story7 years ago

This is wonderful ! And there's such a strong message in your poem, too!

Never miss a chance to make someone happy, especially since it wouldn't cost us anything... Just a smile, a word of appreciation, a compliment to make someone's day... The importance of love and unity.

"Show this fragile world
you’re really listening,"

You paint such a beautiful picture with these few words. Amazed !

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Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it!