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RE: "Rite of Passage" - original fiction - Comedy Open Mic Round 17

in #story7 years ago

This story is fantastic and hilarious! My first thought when he said “airheads” was definitely the candy. Pleasant surprise that it was actually arrowheads!
Thanks for the nomination. I really look forward to trying this. :)

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Thank you so much @riottales I know you're up for it I got a feelin' about you ;) You don't have to write about dogs just do your thing. You know at the time when I encountered this man and he said "airheads" I wasn't aware there was a candy called that. Now I do, but then I don't think this story would have unfolded in my imagination in quite the same way haha

Quite welcome! Haha, well, thank you, hope your feeling is right. There's a good chance it will be about dogs. They do some quite silly things. If it's not, I'll write something about them for you anyway. :)
This story definitely would have gone a different way if you had been thinking like the candy. I'm glad it turned out the way it did!