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RE: Jazz Firebrand's Last Dance - Part 4 (Removed)

in #story8 years ago

What a great story interestingly told, I liked the idea of Masahiro telling the story, I haven't read three other chapters but bIn think that after reading this one I will.

As for the ending, I kind of like it!

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Thanks for reading through this. I felt like the ending was a bit anticlimactic but the only other ending I could think of turns the story into a novella lol.