Wooo... I really enjoyed myself reading this one. The descending madness, distilled nicely into diary's contents. And the little touch about the dates that went further and further from reality is pretty nice as well. Love it.
I wonder why the last date goes back to normality though? I couldn't figure that out.
Congrats for your curie vote, you definitely should write more often :).
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Thank you @scrawly! Time ago, I read a horror story in a diary style and I though that this first narrative could be a very effective point of view for a story of progressive perdition. The final date is back to normal because that's a riddle pointing to something or someone in particular (I won't tell hehe!). I'm flattered for your appreciation.. I would write more, I've so many stories to write still, but being a Bananafish prophet requires my utmost attention to the potassium deity's whispers for now 😜 Who knows how Lilith would look in one of your amazing paints..