You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: SUCCESS (An Original Poem)View the full contextserejandmyself (70)in #story • 8 years ago Great, i like most how you used to break your sentences, it helps to strengthen the message
Thank you, @serejandmyself! It's fun to play with line breaks and structure. You can really change the vibe of the poem that way!
Yep, i like to play with punctaution also