Wow! This was brilliant. I have read stories like these where the protagonist thinks too much about seeing a scary creature and then ends up dying, but yous was by far the best one. The way you focus on the tiny details and how you make everything come to life is brilliant, pure brilliant!
One thing I'd like to point:
warranr anything good.
”You already dear? I’m sure everything is OK.” Assured her husband. At the precise moment, the door opened to.
I hope it is warrant and not warranr and 'you alright dear' and not already dear. Not trying to be a critic, but just thought to point out a few errors so your work flows flawlessly. Hope I didn't offend you. Cheers. <3
Hey there, @sharoonyasir!
One of the most annoying things is not correcting a simple error and having your post stuck like that after one week. So if anything, I should be grateful you brought this to my attention. Thank you!
And also for your kind words. I'm so glad you liked this short that I put out there. Though it was a tad late for Halloween, lol. Bless you and again thanks for the kind remarks. :)
Man, finally someone who doesn't mind that and instead appreciates it. Thank you for this and love your work. Been going through your stories and you are just phenomenal!!
Bless! That means a lot to me. Please forgive the odd spelling mistakes but I do plan to sift through, correct and compile everything after a while... :)
You are so humble. No, you don't need to ask for forgiveness at all. Normally, I never point out flaws in a piece because I understand one can look over things and sometimes forget to correct them even if he/ she does spot them; happens with me all the time. Your piece was just so perfect, it didn't feel right for it to have even a little blemish on it.