I read this “story” twice, but simply don’t get what the story is about. It’s hard to call this a fiction story. You said “perch”. It makes me think of a parrot. So what’s the deal with the net? How does it connect to the cans? If this is a story, you failed to connect the different parts to make an understandable plot.
Please don’t let this put you off writing. You just need to bear in mind that your reader cannot always see what you are thinking. Thanks for participating.
Sorry you didn't like it. The premise is pretty simple. The Net's still up, but nobody other than bots are still posting, and food's getting scarce. Rather than going out to find out the problem, the protagonist is just posting on the Net. . .