Thank you very much clever!
I'm just exploring to write a whole story and I'm sure I will come back to your advices. This all just started and it's just the first chapter. Thank you for offering to use your copyright information, I will add this on the second chapter :)
Sometimes I nabbed myself removing whole parts of the story just because I couldn't describe it in a way that looked correct to me. I will follow your advice to just write it down. Glad to know that there are some people helping me on chat, too.