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RE: A Tale by my GrandMother

in #story7 years ago

Really interesting story. I thought Mr.tortoise's friends were going to betray him by doing something hurtful to him. You kept me in suspense through out. If it were a movie, it will be one that the protagonist dies with the antagonist

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yes, I wanted the story to teach the values of team work. Thanks for stopping by