That's a good example of perjuring yourself for a much more important outcome than the sacrifice you made- and you're probably right, your little brother may have taken a much worse turn had he taken the rap.
Spend a little more time in proofreading to make your post even more excellent- I'm becoming convinced a lot of bad translations may be due just to mis-spellings that change the word completely (other than the old your-yore-you're, too-two, do-due kind of thing). I know (I do it myself) you've spent a lot of time on this post, but mistakes creep in- but you can always catch more when you proof it yet another time. The Preview panel is definitely a huge help.
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Thanks so much for the advice, yes I have been taking that into account! I can assure you I am working on it as well! Its hard sometimes I close my eyes and just type what I feel. The mistakes do happen to make it through!
There's no reason WHATSOEVER to restrict your process- just read through an extra time before you post with a viciously critical eye for detail. I'm dead serious with my criticism, without the slightest intent to troll (content could be a different matter, I'll go after a white supremacist with the longest knife I can find).
When STEEM takes over the world, I want us all to be Jedi against the Dark Side- keep up the fine work.
Yes I agree! thank you! Your advice helps Obi Wan Kanobi
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