Really nice chapter, @zakludick !!! It was a difficult stage in the story and you've delivered an interesting chain :D Love the sections, and how they are paced, between flashbacks and monologs and the ending is ...........very intriguing to say the least!
Cant wait to see what @fromage will come up with :D
Thank you very much @veryspider! Yes... Still keeping things interesting.
Lots of potential there and I am with you. Hope to see awesome stuff from @fromage!