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RE: "Ashes to Ashes" - A Story in 50 Words

in #storyinfiftywords6 years ago

Maybe he is crazy or maybe he isn't. Either way, I'm sure he has a good heart (since he waited for the house to be completely empty). Could it be that he has a past history with the house. Maybe he lost his family in that house under strange and inexplicable circumstances? (Maybe we are going to find out in another story).

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That's a lot like how I imagined it actually! He's a troubled guy because of what he's survived and what he's lost but he's not wrong about the house. I doubt I'll continue the story any time soon though.