Wow, very descriptive story. I could feel that man's lust when he entered the house. Damn You for cutting the story off in such a moment! :p
One suggestion though, could You link image sources at the very end? It distracted me a bit in the middle of reading.
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Thank you! @fiufsciak, ill do that from now on. Greate suggestion will definately continue the story:)