I agree with the critique. Anyone can claim anything on the internet... so it's buyer beware, which is the same disclaimer I use for writing fiction here on HIVE.
I was mostly interested in the saying about what it takes to make an omlette in general... gotta start n by breaking a few things
I must admit I'm watching with my jaw hanging open at what I think is going to happen in America next month - eggs will be flying all over the place I suspect