Nice job. It could be improved if the colour on "Fresh as mother nature" had a stronger contrast to the background, making it more readable. Aside from that, it is pretty decent ad. I'd give it a 7/10
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Nice job. It could be improved if the colour on "Fresh as mother nature" had a stronger contrast to the background, making it more readable. Aside from that, it is pretty decent ad. I'd give it a 7/10
Thank you haha, I was actually worried it would be too wordy for an ad
Yeah it may be a little wordy but it depends on your target market. If it is newspaper ad, the words are fine but if it is internet ad, then the whole thing needs an overall to focus on grabbing attention from a peripheral POV