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RE: My entry for #zapfic contest (Training)

in #teamserbia6 years ago

Really nice writing. It's really nice the way you packed it in a certain word level. The last sentence came to me like a surprise. The starting made me feel the helpless character but in the end, you surprised me completely.

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Thanks for the comment and reading. I am glad you liked it.